Saturday, May 30, 2009

Polo story 6

Hope you like it :)
i made it longer !!!!!!!!!!!
yeah

My sister has Volunteered to edit my post from now on :)

I just hate checking my writing. I once wrote something in a test and when the teacher asked me what did i mean by that :(

i was clueless. God knows where that came from :(

An edited post will have my sister's signature

M"



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Essa was leaving the cinema with a smile on his face. The movie was amazing just the way he thought.

While he was walking in leicester he spotted Moodi and she wasn't alone. She was with a guy taller then her and was stuck to him like glue hiding under his jacket. He didn't know why the sight of her with the guy made him uncomfortable. He avoided her and decided he wouldn't want to disturb them.

He went home since he had work the next day.

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Knock knock

M: what ? "screaming"


Her mother: its 7:00 am didnt u tell me to wake u up

M: oh sorry mama thank u

Moodi got up and took a shower. She then applied some make up since she will be going for lunch straight afterwards with her mom. They are invited by her mothers friend. She decided she will wear her white dress with her red heels ( yeah she loves those heels) She took her snake skin bag and went down stairs to get the approval of her mother.

Mother: yeah good u chose that u look fresh and cute but don't u think the headband we bought the other day will go with it.


M: yes thanks I forgot about that

She kissed her mother and got the band and hurried because she was late.

Moodi entered starbucks to find Dana sitting in the same table near the window. She thought yeah now we have our own table like friends. (i know she is a bit crazy but u got to love her )

M: hi dana I'm sorry I'm late

D: no its okay I was early

M:oh do u want anything I'm going to order

D: no thanks already got my order "pointing at her drink"

Moodi headed to order her drink when she found Essa in front of her talking on the phone. She thought when he finishes she will say hi. She was looking at the sandwiches and muffins wondering what to order. She couldn't help over hearing.

E: oh the batman movie already went to it sorry

F:oh so was it good (this part she didn't hear :p)

E: yes it was very good okay talk to u later

E: May i have one caffe Latte" while taking out money out of his wallet"

Essa kind of turned around while he was taking out what he owed for the coffee. He was surprised to see Moodi.

E: hi

M: Hi

E: i didnt know you were behind me

M: I was waiting for you to finish your phone call to say hi

E:oh

M:I am sorry but i heard you watched batman.

E: Yes it was amazing i saw you there in leicester but you were busy so i didnt say hi

M: oh that was my brother. He made me skip lunch to go to that movie but i must say it was worth the waiting in line for the ticket.

E: did you see the car

They were discussing the movie while they waited for their orders. The orders finished each one took their order and said their goodbyes and left. Essa to work and moodi back to the table to start the tutoring lesson. Essa while he was going out watched Moodi go to her table and was dumb struck by who she was sitting with. She was sitting with his sister. He made a mental note to ask his sister who she is.
Essa then headed to his work happy because he will finally discover who Moodi is. He was very curious but didnt want to be rude.

until next time
xoxoxoxo

M''

7 comments:

Dazzlin said...

*Doin the Happy Dance* PART 6 WOOHOO... at least now he knows that she was with her bro so he might pursue her :P.. o he saw her with his sis so NOW HE CAN FIND OUT MORE ABOUT HER.. YAAAY... lool love whr this story is heading...

tots said...

oooo ur on a roll girl ;p ! keep going... getting interesting ;*

<3

Passionate ;** said...

yeeeeees!! go for it!!! let him google her looool ;p

Cuteandcuddly said...

Dazzlin: LOL who said anything about perusing her " confused look "
Oh forgot sorry to jump in with you while you were dancing i hope you didnt mind :P

lovestruckblat:lol thanks

whatastrangerdoestome:oh you reminded me of twilight when he told her "it was an adrenaline rush its very common you can google it :P"

Dazzlin said...

loool girl hes gona be goin after her now that he knows shes not attached.. deep down he likes her and now he has the GREEN LIGHT:P:P.. its never too late to join in the dancing:P:P

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glittery-butterfliez said...

Btw i luv ur story ;pPp
Yallah next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :**

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